Date: 2013-01-06 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pygmymuse.livejournal.com
Lol. Duncan deserves that fate.

Date: 2013-01-06 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lithiumlaughter.livejournal.com
Oh. Good. Gravy.

Emma! Jean! Scott!

The diamond casing crept over his mind again, but couldn’t seem to pass the determined wall of flames.
This line is probably one of the most beautiful in the piece. It's well written as a sentence all on its own, but sums up the main conflict and plays with just how huge and how powerful these girls -- soon to be women! -- are.


And Scott. I want to hug the guy so very much. And pass him some more advil before fist-bumping him for not only the cool he kept while the girls were fighting IN HIS MIND (Please tell Emma that she owes me a Tylenol, then get out of my head!), but for his wonderful underhandedness at the end.

This was so very worth waiting for. Thank you!

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