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2013-02-06 05:27 am (UTC)
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Oh.
I think I should have read this before I sent that email.
I think I know what's bothering me about the story's current incarnation.
I can't
stand
the way she experiences her world. The constant pain is real enough to where it makes me, as a reader, squirm. That's it.
:(
I kept wanting to call it too visceral, and I'm not sure that's the right word, but I do feel uncomfortable reading Rachelle as she is now.
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Date: 2013-02-06 05:27 am (UTC)I think I should have read this before I sent that email.
I think I know what's bothering me about the story's current incarnation.
I can't stand the way she experiences her world. The constant pain is real enough to where it makes me, as a reader, squirm. That's it.
:(
I kept wanting to call it too visceral, and I'm not sure that's the right word, but I do feel uncomfortable reading Rachelle as she is now.