I would have preferred getting an intro to her without this... angle to it. Were it me, I might have written a future interlude with them where they reference working well together but how it didn't start that way and flashing back with it. And... it probably would have been in Justus' point of view not hers.
I did have a bad day today, too, so I'm a bit... minefieldy again, too.
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Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: The Unsuspecting Suspect
Date: 2013-10-04 03:01 am (UTC)I still didn't like her much.
I would have preferred getting an intro to her without this... angle to it. Were it me, I might have written a future interlude with them where they reference working well together but how it didn't start that way and flashing back with it. And... it probably would have been in Justus' point of view not hers.
I did have a bad day today, too, so I'm a bit... minefieldy again, too.