Cover Test: Crossing the Barrier

[scribblemyname]

So I was actually trying to design a cover for the collection, Gone Hunting, but I ended up with this: a newly branded, much more professional potential cover for “Crossing the Barrier.”

I think it appeals more to a younger audience than I was going for, but considering the age of the protagonist, that might not be a bad thing.

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Comments

[scribblemyname]

Hmm... No. The light around her hand is actually a story element. She's a radiant cyberpath calling a storm. Move the text? I can work with that. :gets thoughty:

[pygmymuse.livejournal.com]

I just thought I'd tell you it seemed more religious than scifi. You don't have to change it.

You don't have to change anything on my account.

I thought maybe you could try putting it between the title and the name, but I don't know. That's up to you as the cover artist.

(This is the kind of thing that drives my cover artist nuts.)

[scribblemyname]

It's pretty important to me to know that it's touting a genre that isn't even present. I do write Christian fic, but this ain't it.