It's That Time Again...
Jul. 1st, 2013 09:21 pmI've been mired in big fics or flexible prompts for a while now. Feeling blah and uncertain which big fic I really want to mire in at the moment. Prompts anyone?
1. Character/Fandom/Original Fiction World
2. Prompt or question of any kind
I'd like to commentfic if you all would be so kind as to help me out? :bats eyelashes:
Originally published at Liana Mir. You can comment here or there.
Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 10:16 pm (UTC)When Collie finally got out of debriefing, she met the sour faces of her senior officers.
“You are officially written up,” Agent Hill informed her with a frown on his face.
Phil just gave her the look—the one that said never do that again. “Nikolai passed initial interviews. He will be joining our organization officially.”
Collie nodded, trying to figure out whether she should be chastened or pleased.
Phil turned to Hill and held out her hand. “Now I believe you owe me fifty dollars.”
Hill growled but pulled the bill out of his wallet. “And she calls herself a professional.”
Collie stared at the exchange, then shook her head, no longer feeling either. She would have bet her paycheck Phil knew she would end up letting Atrax live. Apparently, it would’ve been a pretty safe bet.
Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 10:46 pm (UTC)WOMAN.
WOMAN.
WHAT IS THIS THAT YOU HAVE DONE TO ME. AVENGERS 919 HOLY CRAP.
I'm sitting here giggling like a little girl on Christmas morning because OH MY GOD this is amazing.
Atrax. Phillipa. Collie. OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD.
This is beautiful. The way you describe Collie slowing down and shallowing her breathing is sheer perfection. I actually felt my own breathing slow a little. Wait for it. Wait for it.
And then you have their meeting. Nikolai being exactly what he ought to be -- charming, and edged as all get out. Giving him the handle Atrax is so incredibly fitting it's insane. And then Collie, brash and stupid-brave, just sauntering in there and making nice conversation while Nikolai has a knife to her ribs. *spins her chair around in glee*
AND PHILLIPA WHO IS AMAZING AND I LOVE HER FOREVER.
Oh, good gravy. You have no idea how happy this makes me. And you have no idea how much I want to play in this universe now. Would you like me to write you a little Avengers 919?
Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 11:17 pm (UTC)Bonus points for Antonia Stark. :grins:
Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 11:19 pm (UTC)Wanna give me a prompt, or shall I just run off cackling into
the nightMicrosoft Word?Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 11:26 pm (UTC)Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 11:45 pm (UTC)Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 11:53 pm (UTC)And for the record, I am having far too much fun with your piece. By which I mean pain. Lots of pain.
Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-02 11:54 pm (UTC)Re: 919 Avengers: Hedge Your Bets [1/?]
Date: 2013-07-03 02:13 am (UTC)