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This entry is part 44 of 51 in the series 365 Challenge

Gacked from penknife:

You post a topic, list, category, whatever, in comments. (examples: "Five SG-1 Mission Reports That Were Less Than Entirely Truthful", or "Five Times Bruce Banner Lost His Toothbrush," or "Five Ways Nikola Tesla Failed to Take Over the World"). I'll answer with a list of five things.

Ideally fandoms that I know something about, unless you want me to guess, which could be entertaining but probably not the way you want. Or (and preferably) original fiction. All storyworlds on the table, i.e. Seven Days, Kingdoms and Thorn, the Alliance, Vardin, etc.


Completed Ficlets & Scenes

Kingdoms and Thorn:

Originally published at Liana Mir. You can comment here or there.

Date: 2013-08-07 02:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
Five times Rachelle thought she might be in love with Justus and told herself she wasn't.

(A part of me wants to add a one time she was because that's what those five fics always seem to do, but... I'm not even sure this works because of how Rachelle thinks of herself and love, but... eh... This was the best I could come up with.)

Date: 2013-08-07 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
Whatever works best. Like I said, I knew it didn't really fit Rachelle. It was just... all I could think of.

Date: 2013-08-07 03:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
You're welcome. I admit, it's something I was curious about myself.
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
Okay, first... If you referred to Storm as Rett before, I missed it. It took me a bit to realize who he was.

Minor typo: I’ve a feeling she’s going to be as stubborn as their parents.”

Should be her, yes?

I don't know that I should say this, but I want to know more of the animosity between Justus and Red Wolf. I know you mentioned it before, but this just made me more curious about it.


Am also a bit curious about where Shift is as this is going on.

I like the images of him holding the baby and her holding it, and also the parallel between her and Justus and Whisper/Red Wolf. That is such a great moment.

Re: Kingdoms & Thorn Commentfic: It Came Up

Date: 2013-08-31 03:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
I think the way she healed him shows a lot. Even if she would have done it for anyone else on the team...

Well... I guess it just seems like more than that with the two of them.

A part of me wants to say, "but he's not Shift's and you should mind," but... that's just me.

Re: Kingdoms & Thorn Commentfic: It Came Up

Date: 2013-09-03 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
:)

I have to admit, I'm a bit intrigued but also scared by the idea of Shift loving someone, especially when you say it like that. Though... I admit, I'm relieved it's not Justus because... I could see her needing someone like him and he did remind her that she had a heart, so I'd almost want him to pick her because she seems more damaged by what happened and what she did and would need him more if that makes sense.

It is interesting that she chose to intervene.
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
That would confuse most people. His poor family. They don't know what they're in for with Rachelle.

but Justus does. :)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
Accepting people for who they are is what love is about, really, whether that's family or friends or more.

There might have to be some fluff pieces with the family when it's fest time again.

Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: Defining Love

Date: 2013-09-11 12:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
She cares. :) And she does marry him because she loves him...

And I almost want to ask (but don't want to all the same) to see where they went on that assignment.

I feel like something's missing here: "Battery Acid," he called her, his favorite handle hold her by.

Re: Kingdoms and Thorn Ficlet: Defining Love

Date: 2013-09-11 12:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
Caring is the first step. :) It shows just how much she does love him that she does choose to do that.

It has the potential to be very... awkward and even unpleasant, though some of the moments where they were pretending to be married might have been nice/sweet.

It wasn't that bad. I just let you know so you could fix it later.
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
(I did, actually, like the first attempt, though I didn't have a chance to comment on it before it was gone.)

Meld is a very interesting character. I would like to see more of him.

Shift and Rachelle in the same piece. I like that Meld pointed out that Shift cared about her.

Kind of miss his realization that she will, but this does well to show the interconnection between these four.

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