Readin' & Writin'
Jun. 21st, 2011 10:05 amJust Read
Open Door |
in_the_blue
There's something lyrical about this one. It just draws you in and lets you swim around. It's the first story I've ever seen without any quotation marks for the dialogue. I'm tempted to say, just leave them out, this lyrical, dream-like quality is just that good.
Wow. Am I really only six pages in? This is where I remark to myself, I'm sitting in the hands of an author who knows what they're doing.
Twelve pages: still hooked.
Wow. (I'm saying that a lot.) On page seventeen, and I'm genuinely awed at how real this is, how it handles these deep, crazy hurts and makes me feel them but not die with them; it's not drama; it's poetry, and it's perfect.
I don't think I'd care if there were chapter breaks. I could keep reading this without them until I hit the end (don't end).
It ended. You better be reading this,
in_the_blue, 'cause I expect you to get back on it.
Just Written
Drabble: Just Desserts
Fandom: X-Men: Evolution
Pairings: Romy/Kiotr
[LJ | FF]
Drabble: Sacrilege
Fandom: Excalibur
Pairing: Pryde/Wisdom
[LJ | FF]
And now, I have to go transcribe...
Open Door |
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There's something lyrical about this one. It just draws you in and lets you swim around. It's the first story I've ever seen without any quotation marks for the dialogue. I'm tempted to say, just leave them out, this lyrical, dream-like quality is just that good.
Wow. Am I really only six pages in? This is where I remark to myself, I'm sitting in the hands of an author who knows what they're doing.
Twelve pages: still hooked.
Wow. (I'm saying that a lot.) On page seventeen, and I'm genuinely awed at how real this is, how it handles these deep, crazy hurts and makes me feel them but not die with them; it's not drama; it's poetry, and it's perfect.
I don't think I'd care if there were chapter breaks. I could keep reading this without them until I hit the end (don't end).
It ended. You better be reading this,
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
Just Written
Drabble: Just Desserts
Fandom: X-Men: Evolution
Pairings: Romy/Kiotr
[LJ | FF]
Drabble: Sacrilege
Fandom: Excalibur
Pairing: Pryde/Wisdom
[LJ | FF]
And now, I have to go transcribe...