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We're prompting fluffy, lighthearted stuff of any variety, no canon/pairing/character information required, though permitted.

Date: 2014-06-24 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
I was just a little girl
When your hand brushed by my hand
And I will be an old woman
Happy to have spent
My whole life with one man

~Lori McKenna - "One Man"

Re: Ficlet: The Velocity of Rain [2/2]

Date: 2014-06-24 10:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
I kept trying to think of something to say to this one, but I'm tripped up bad over the format of it. I have decided I hate "I to you" fic. (So I will not be reading that Justus/Rachelle Au one because I can't tolerate the format.)

This seems like it would be very sweet/cute if I didn't have trouble reading this format.

Date: 2014-06-25 08:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
Yeah, I tried to get into the AU, but I was having the same problem. I think because I am not the "you" of the story, it jars me out of the story every time I see it, and I lose the story.

I wouldn't mind reading a third person version of it, though. It's not even first person that's an issue. It's the "you." I can't follow the story when it's like that, unfortunately.
From: [identity profile] thecatisacritic.livejournal.com
This is cute.

I like that they were both chasing each other all the time. :)

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