Well, if you would like someone to read what you have and give you thoughts, I'd be willing to do that. Don't know that I can give my usual quick-turnaround because I'll be down in Denver for training for most of tomorrow, and brain dead after that, but... still... Willing to read. :)
But that's the issue. This one isn't Mira's story. Ah, well. I actually know her pretty well, just not whether Rachelle's story needs her.
She's a pattern, a naturally gifted that was used to figure out how to create operatives in the first place, which means she's graciously blessed with no side effects. Her little sister is the healer that I need there at the end with Rachelle, but I'm kind of just doing the one word after another bit until it becomes clear how this casting issue's going to shake out.
Sometimes characters need to be there, and sometimes they don't, but you never know until you find the point where they're needed or you reach the end without them.
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Date: 2013-01-29 04:50 am (UTC)Maybe Mira needs to take a bit and find her story. What's her background? Where did she come from? She might need to speak for herself for a bit.
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Date: 2013-01-29 04:14 pm (UTC)She's a pattern, a naturally gifted that was used to figure out how to create operatives in the first place, which means she's graciously blessed with no side effects. Her little sister is the healer that I need there at the end with Rachelle, but I'm kind of just doing the one word after another bit until it becomes clear how this casting issue's going to shake out.
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Date: 2013-01-30 01:44 am (UTC)Sometimes characters need to be there, and sometimes they don't, but you never know until you find the point where they're needed or you reach the end without them.